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Mirrored Spirits
Spirits-
flowing constantly
moving gracefully
forever dancing, whispering winds
waters rippling in mirrored images
casting light
~reflected~
light casting
images mirrored in rippling waters
wind whispering dancing forever
gracefully moving
constantly flowing
spirits.
1:52 PM - 1/24/2007 -
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I liked this one. It gave me the notion of being pushed down
a stream by a gentle, yet forceful current. I like the breaks
in word count combos, the theme, and the feeling I leave
with at the end. Good one! When's the book coming out?
DarthTsynn - 2:58 PM - 1/24/2007
Thank you
Thank you once more for your kind words, this one was a challange, but the form intrigued me and I had to give it a try. The book is still a work in progress
SilverWind - 3:07 PM - 1/24/2007
oh, cool.
thanks for dropping a line =D. your poetry is lovely... i especially adore the reflection device here.
sato - 4:46 PM - 1/25/2007
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