"Oriental Nekkhalya", Apartment # C-4. House # 53, Road # 9/A, Dhanmandi R/A,Dhaka-1209

Graduated from AIR FORCE PUBLIC SCHOOL AND COLLEGE, known as ETON of Pakistan.

Went on to professional pastures before settling down on the slopes of tea growing hilly locales of the sub-continent. Mingled in mellifluous abundance with the Britts and other tea garden owners closer home. Followed it up with

stints in textiles, garments, and a gas valve station.

Billy has professional exposure in Tropical Agriculture from the Trans World Tutorial College U.K and is an

Associate and Fellow Member of The Brtish Management Association.

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When contacted, Inspector Wazed Gazi said that in primary investigation he detected discrepancy in accounts in four years' registers of Satkhira Sadar Hospital and seven upazila hospitals. The registers were also seized by BAC. But the probe is stalled now due to "lack of directive", he said.

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When contacted, Inspector Wazed Gazi said, that in primary investigation he detected discrepancy in accounts in four years' registers of Satkhira Sadar Hospital and seven upazila hospitals. The BAC seized the registers. Because of "lack of directive", the probe is deferred, he said.

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A QUALITY AND FOOD SAFETY ASSURED COMPANY

Hail to the opening drive on food safety.

Our premise was visted by mobile court and they were satisfied

X's because the first and only bakery to achieve ISO 9001-20000- and HACCP certification in April 2004, ISO9001-2000 is the benchmark for all management system and the basis for all management system and the basis for all other certification schemes. HACCP is the only internationally recognized standard for food processing industry.

Being a Bakery, Food Safety is an integral part of our Quality Management System and has been incorporated in every process of our business. Hygine and sanitation principles are strictly followed to ensure Food Safety at all times.

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Writing Style=122 Dreadful Average Sentence=19 Fair Passive Index 80 Poor

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A QUALITY AND FOOD SAFETY ASSURED COMPANY

Hail to the opening drive on food safety.

The mobile court visted our premier and expressed satisfaction.

X's is the first and only bakery to achieve ISO 9001-20000- and HACCP certification in April 2004. ISO9001-2000 is the benchmark for all management system and the basis for all other certification schemes. HACCP is the only internationally recognized standard for food processing industry.

Being a Bakery, Food Safety is an integral part of our Quality Management System .

Hygiene and sanitation is in incorporated every process principles to ensure Food Safety.

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Writing Style=31 Average Average Sentence= 13 Excellent Passive Index=0 Good