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The Dark Sun
(This was ripped from my now defunct myspace blog.)
I try and hide
But it's no use
He just laughs
Continues abuse
Dark rays shine over
The whole world round
They penetrate deep
Deep underground
Spoiling the soil
Withering the plants
Evaporating lakes
And frying the ants
And nothing to do
But sit and sweat
Waiting for him
To finally set...
Do you dare to stare?
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Posted: 4:25 PM, Monday, July 3, 2006 |
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Dark Sun
| I enjoyed the poem, and very cool picture |
Posted by SilverWind at 6:20 PM, Monday, July 3, 2006 |
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Nice poem...
| Is it one of your own creations? It has a deep sort of sorrowful edge to it. Waiting for the sun to set and then it takes you on a dark journey into the dark of the night to wander and travel around with ones own imagination. :-) and (((hugs))) from Dawnie. |
Posted by DAWNIE at 7:35 PM, Monday, July 3, 2006 |
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| wow! I loved your little poem! and the picture was awsome! I'm going to add pictures to my poems now, once i get round to doing it.................... |
Posted by jasminecrystal at 11:56 PM, Monday, July 3, 2006 |
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:)
The title is hilarious! Was that a blot on the cloud? looks very not-part-of-the-photo?
You are funny, man. |
Posted by fakhra at 12:34 PM, Tuesday, July 4, 2006 |
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Great poem
| that was a really good poem i loved it and i loved the picture. i love poems with that.......what doya call it.......i don't know i guess kind of dark setting. i also love angesty like poems , dont ask why cuz i really dont know :) lol |
Posted by HappyYetBrokenGirl at 7:03 PM, Friday, July 7, 2006 |
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