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The Birthday Boy

(Thank you for the comments on my little poem.  Here's a bigger poem for ya: This was written for a webpage that posts peoples poems, art, and short stories and has a different theme each month.  The theme I wrote for was called "The Darker Side Of The Mind")

 

On one good morning
In the city of L.A.
A boy recieved a puppy
For his 2nd birthday
He laughed with joy
As the puppy played
The boy only wished
If that moment stayed

 

In the kitchen
The puppy in need
The boy would laugh
As he gave him feed
But the dog did not stop
For his mind told him not
And he recieved too much
From his master the tot

 

So much in fact
The pup did vomit
And flop to the ground
All this the boy saw it
He prodded with his finger
And wept as he said
"Wake up little goggy...
Please don't be dead"

 

Time passed by
The boys now a man
30 years to the day
He forgot as best he can
And now he had friends
Family and wealth
A two car garage
And also his health

 

He got many presents
He opened them all
Now ready for pie
But his wife did call
"Why heres one you missed
It was under the table"
"From your loving children"
It said on the label

 

He tore into it quickly
Excited to see
Just what the hell
This thing could be
From inside the box
It bagan to shake
He backed up a moment
Afraid twas a snake

 

But out from the box
Poked an adorable head
It looked at the man
And quietly said
"Bark bark, sniff sniff"
"Whine" and "ruff"
"Grr" and "whimper"
And "howl" and stuff

 

Suddenly in the man
Something awoken inside
He began to sweat
And go wide-eyed
He screamed so loud
The guests did gasp
He reached for his present
A hammer he did clasp

 

And down it came swiftly
On the young little thing
Again and again
The man did swing
Until there was nothing
But bloody dog pulp
His friends left the room
And his wife did gulp

 

"Honey?" She asked
With tears in her eye
And he smiled and said
"I'm better now, how 'bout that pie."


Posted: 4:01 AM, Tuesday, July 4, 2006
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As Usual You Get It Wrong

Naturally you cannot get anything right, misquote and take things out of context and with you being a boorish male i'm not surprised! And leave it to a misguided fool like you to include stuff i never mentioned! ughhhhhhh!

Edited by Heather on Tuesday, July 4, 2006 at 7:45 AM

Posted by Heather at 4:44 AM, Tuesday, July 4, 2006

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Boy that is from a dark corner of the mind...

I had to read that a few times and finally I got the gist of the murderous ending. It is not a poem for the faint hearted is it??????? Do they give any prizes out on this creative web page and if so did you get one? You have a talent a dark mysterious talent. Keep writing it's what keeps the blog pages interesting.
A big :-) and a (hug) from Dawnie.

Posted by DAWNIE at 6:41 AM, Tuesday, July 4, 2006

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